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Ted Wade's avatar

Not bad. Not bad at all.

Raine's avatar

The authorship of the final poem is slightly unclear given that all other GPT-authored poems are double-quoted. But my, my, that last one is good.

(Also line 14 of the original poem is ~~needlessly gendered~~ objectifying.)

Erik Hoel's avatar

Love this. You probably don't want to give it away, but was the last poem from a LLM? I'd be impressed if it were, because the middle ones are so banal.

Anon's avatar

The very last one is almost all plagiarism of the imagery of the Dhammapada from Theravada Buddhism. Specifically, Chapter 11: http://www.buddhanet.net/dhammapada/d_oldage.htm

Roger’s Bacon's avatar

Gasp! Oh no! He's broken the laws of writing! Heaven forbid he make an artistic choice to not cite a thousands-year old text! Lock him up and throw away the key!

Lisa’s Last Words's avatar

🤣🤣🤣♥️

The 21st Century Salonnière's avatar

Sandwiches, sandwiches, sandwiches

Roger’s Bacon's avatar

yummy, yummy, yummy

Lisa’s Last Words's avatar

How long did that take? It was impressive I will have to admit. Will we follow along or take off in a snit? 🤣 sorry I couldn’t resist.♥️