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Not bad. Not bad at all.

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The authorship of the final poem is slightly unclear given that all other GPT-authored poems are double-quoted. But my, my, that last one is good.

(Also line 14 of the original poem is ~~needlessly gendered~~ objectifying.)

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Love this. You probably don't want to give it away, but was the last poem from a LLM? I'd be impressed if it were, because the middle ones are so banal.

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The very last one is almost all plagiarism of the imagery of the Dhammapada from Theravada Buddhism. Specifically, Chapter 11: http://www.buddhanet.net/dhammapada/d_oldage.htm

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Sandwiches, sandwiches, sandwiches

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