Not bad. Not bad at all.
The authorship of the final poem is slightly unclear given that all other GPT-authored poems are double-quoted. But my, my, that last one is good.
(Also line 14 of the original poem is ~~needlessly gendered~~ objectifying.)
Love this. You probably don't want to give it away, but was the last poem from a LLM? I'd be impressed if it were, because the middle ones are so banal.
The very last one is almost all plagiarism of the imagery of the Dhammapada from Theravada Buddhism. Specifically, Chapter 11: http://www.buddhanet.net/dhammapada/d_oldage.htm
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